S.I.P. (Still in progress)

I have been writing a song recently and I think it is almost finished... I have no title and I need to revise/correct anything that needs to be corrected.

It's about me asking God to give me bits of his character so I can see, feel, and experience what He experiences daily. Everything that I thought was good and worthy of praise is nothing without God's love and mercy upon me, so I want to be so dependent on Him and being secure in His presence. Something like that...lol

But here is what I have so far...


Give me Your eyes
Show me a glimpse of what You see.
Give me Your heart
Show me how great Your love can be.

Give me wings
So I can soar over the seas.
Give me light
So I can shine in the darkest nights.

Everything I'm holding onto is nothing without You...

I want to be so dependent on who You are
Cause nothing in this world compares
I know that You will never ever leave
So I'll fix my eyes on you,
And never turn away.


I think it still needs modifications and stuff. I wish I had some kind of recording device so I can remember the melody and chords... :/

Anyway..that's it for now.